<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Hi Folks,<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I totally agree with John’s suggested edits and I made a number of changes to help to clarify things for recipients on the list who might not be a familiar with acronymns and GREN activities as I think only a fraction of our listserv actually attends our meetings on a regular basis but we want to keep everyone engaged and well informed.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Please feel free to use or discard any of my suggestions. I have attached them as a Microsoft Word file below with Track Changes turned on:</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""></div></body></html>