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<FONT FACE="Calibri, Verdana, Helvetica, Arial"><SPAN STYLE='font-size:11pt'>Thanks Susans. It is looking really good.<BR>
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There is one sentence that needs to be modified to make it clearer: “</SPAN></FONT><SPAN STYLE='font-size:11pt'><FONT FACE="Times New Roman">Identifying “an activity that reduces the recharge of an aquifer” is not unique to the Townships of Amaranth and East Garafraxa (6-3).” I think this sentence is no longer clear to the reader. The point was that the report says that problems related to water getting into the recharge aquifers occurs for only the two named municipalities. I don’t think that sentence clearly says that now.<BR>
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Other than that I just saw a spelling mistake and a bit of formatting to avoid the letterhead.<BR>
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On 13-01-13 8:50 PM, "Susan Koswan" <<a href="susankoswan@execulink.com">susankoswan@execulink.com</a>> wrote:<BR>
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</FONT></SPAN><BLOCKQUOTE><FONT FACE="Arial"><SPAN STYLE='font-size:12pt'>Hi everyone,<BR>
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I’ve just taken Susan B’s distillation and tried to tighten it up a bit more. I aim to be really spare with words with these kinds of documents, because I figure they have a better chance of being read. Lots of white space helps too. So hopefully nothing important has got dropped in my pruning. <BR>
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I think I can do some work on it Monday, but won’t have much time Tuesday. <BR>
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Susan K <BR>
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