[GREN-Exec] First draft GREN 5 year review of ROW climate action

[Mr. Kevin R. Thomason]

Hi Susan,

Glad to see the feedback from the others - I agree with their points and recommendations.  Work in what you can.

I don’t have much specific feedback.  You have done a fantastic job of integrating so much information and so many concepts.  I like the idea of the overarching comments and then getting into additional details.

A minor formatting detail is that the first numbered responses - up to #14 are bold, then the following are normal text.  It might be helpful to bold them all consistently.

I’m sorry my feedback is slow and that I haven’t had time for more robust input.

Keep moving forward - there are many good concepts here that we need everyone in the Region to be working towards.

Cheers,
Kevin.

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Kevin Thomason

1115 Cedar Grove Road
Waterloo, Ontario Canada  N2J 3Z4

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> On Feb 26, 2021, at 4:04 PM, Mr. Kevin R. Thomason <kevthomason at gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Wow!  Susan, at first glance this looks fantastic.  I will take some time to look it over this weekend and follow-up more.
> 
> Cheers,
> Kevin.
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> Kevin Thomason
> 
> 1115 Cedar Grove Road
> Waterloo, Ontario Canada  N2J 3Z4
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> Phone: (519) 888-0519
> Mobile Phone/WhatsApp: (519) 240-1648
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>> On Feb 26, 2021, at 2:48 PM, Susan Koswan <susankoswan at execulink.com <mailto:susankoswan at execulink.com>> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi GREN exec,
>> 
>> I've attached the first run-through of GREN's submission to ROW's 5 year climate change review paper. Still needs a lot of work and input on How We Move. I've generally formatted both Susan B and Sandra B's input for How we live, work, build, but have done no editing.
>> 
>> Please. Someone take it and run with it. My brain hurts.
>> 
>> Susan K
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