[GREN-Exec] revised GRCA source water protection submission 2013

[Susan Koswan]

Sorry - my bad - I've now attached the full document with John's
e-signature, including our Appendixed 2010 submission. Waiting for the OK
and I will pdf it. 

 

Susan K 

 

From: Executive [mailto:executive-bounces at gren.ca] On Behalf Of Susan Koswan
Sent: January-14-13 12:18 PM
To: 'Susan Bryant'; 'GREN Executive'
Cc: 'Bob Burtt'; 'Daphne Nicholls'
Subject: Re: [GREN-Exec] revised GRCA source water protection submission
2013

 

How's this? Just as I was about to send it, Susan B re-sent hers with the
change, but I had already reverted that one line to the original. Spelling
and formatting checked and rechecked. I think all we need now is John's
e-signature and I will put it in pdf and John can send it off.

Susan K 

 

 

rom: Susan Bryant [mailto:shbryant at uwaterloo.ca] 
Sent: January-14-13 11:31 AM
To: 'Susan Koswan'; 'GREN Executive'
Cc: 'Bob Burtt'; 'Daphne Nicholls'
Subject: RE: [GREN-Exec] revised GRCA source water protection submission
2013

 

Sorry! Here's the attachment.

 

Hi Susan K-

 

Your red pen is wonderfully sharp. Thanks for your edit! I went through and
fixed a few sp. and punc. Otherwise, I think it's ready to go. Can you put
in John's signature, append the GREN 2010 comments, and adjust the
letterhead? If not, I can.

 

Cheers,

 

Susan B 

 

From: Executive [mailto:executive-bounces at gren.ca] On Behalf Of Susan Koswan
Sent: Sunday, January 13, 2013 8:51 PM
To: 'GREN Executive'
Cc: 'Bob Burtt'; 'Daphne Nicholls'
Subject: [GREN-Exec] revised GRCA source water protection submission 2013

 

Hi everyone,

 

I've just taken Susan B's distillation and tried to tighten it up a bit
more. I aim to be really spare with words with these kinds of documents,
because I figure they have a better chance of being read. Lots of white
space helps too. So hopefully nothing important has got dropped in my
pruning. 

 

I think I can do some work on it Monday, but won't have much time Tuesday. 

 

Susan K 

 

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